st patrick

WALT retell a story.
WWBSWW tell the story in our own words.
Planning
Who St Patrick was and what he liked doing and what he didn't like doing
 - where he was born - what his family was like
He liked walking on the beach. He liked whittling his slingshot.
He hated school.
One day,
- didn't go to school
- went to the beach
- pirates came
- stole him and the other girls and boys
- sold him in Ireland to Milchu
- was a shepherd - looked after sheep and pigs (swine)
- started talked to God - trusted God and was happy
- One night, heard God talking to him - told him to go the a ship
- when he was on board, - big storm - ship grounded in France
- crew starving
- Patrick asked God for help
- God sent him pigs and an apple tree- ate pork dinner and apple sauce

One day a boy named Patrick was at school he hated school so one day he was walking to school and decided  to walk to the beach instead.He walked along the beach and suddenly he saw people on boats pulling up as many  kids as they could find up on to their boats Patrick got pulled up on a rope on to the boat as well.Then he got taken to a country called island  he got a job as a shepherd at winter he would help make butter and cheese Patrick was a shepherd for 6 years in then won night Patrick was asleep and he heard a voice go now Patrick your boat is waiting for you. When they started to drift off and a big storm hit them. Patrick prayed god please send some food so he did he sent them apple trees pork apple sauce.