Monday 27 July 2015

Walking Up The Hakarimatas

We have been learning to use personification in our writing.
It was a cold winter morning when I went up the Hakarimatas. I was now at the steps. The frost was biting my fingers.The steps crunched because of the frost. The trees stood  as still as a post. There was silence because all the birds, insects and other animals were snuggled up.

In the Cold

  1. We are learning to use personification. It was a cold winter morning when I went up the Hakarimatas. I was now at the steps. The frost was biting my fingers.The steps crushed because of the frost. The trees stood  as still  as a post. There was silence because of all the birds , insects and other animals were snuggled up.

Monday 20 July 2015

Winter morning

It was a frosty morning. I saw the grass coated with snow. It was waiting for the  sun to  melt the snow. I was having a snow fight.