Piper And Holly

Piper and Holly were sisters and best friends. They loved to go on adventures. They lived in a forest and there were lots of trees all around them. Holly had brown hair and Piper had blonde hair. They loved playing in the forest. They lived in a wooden house.

One sunny Saturday morning, the two girls wandered their way through the forest. They heard a sound like a bird calling out for its mum cheep cheep. The kingfisher soundlessly flew across the forest. A baby kingfisher's mum was getting some worms for her babies. 

There was silence for a while but suddenly they heard squirrels squealing. They heard another sound the stream was splash splash over the rocks. A frog gently floating on a leaf downstream.

They were lost. They didn't know what path to go down. They were just about to go down the path but they heard their mum and dad calling out for them. Their mum and dad gave them a big hug and they said ''come on well take you home for a cup of hot chocolate''. 

You have used some great descriptive sentences in your story, including ‘activating the noun’. Well done.