We have been learning to use personification in our writing.
It was a cold winter morning when I went up the Hakarimatas. I was now at the steps. The frost was biting my fingers.The steps crunched because of the frost. The trees stood as still as a post. There was silence because all the birds, insects and other animals were snuggled up.
I am 7 and I like to ride horses and go to Tauranga with my mum and my dog. We go to the beach and swim, lay on the sand and make sandcastles.
Monday, 27 July 2015
In the Cold
- We are learning to use personification. It was a cold winter morning when I went up the Hakarimatas. I was now at the steps. The frost was biting my fingers.The steps crushed because of the frost. The trees stood as still as a post. There was silence because of all the birds , insects and other animals were snuggled up.
Monday, 20 July 2015
Winter morning
It was a frosty morning. I saw the grass coated with snow. It was waiting for the sun to melt the snow. I was having a snow fight.
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